Well done. Imagery and a great plot. I found the line, "She was not the one bringing the charges, but she occupied space in a way that made him aware of his sins." to be such great writing! What a way to describe a person! If I can keep up, I'd definetly enjoy to keep reading more of your work like this! Again, well done!
This was beautifully layered and complex. One of those pieces you'd have to read several times. Love it!
This is fantastic. Truly.
thank you soo much!!
Well done. Imagery and a great plot. I found the line, "She was not the one bringing the charges, but she occupied space in a way that made him aware of his sins." to be such great writing! What a way to describe a person! If I can keep up, I'd definetly enjoy to keep reading more of your work like this! Again, well done!